Burn – behind the scenes

Well, not exactly behind the scenes but close enough, I guess. Three months to go until publication and I’m very excited to see what people think of my new tale. This is especially true because it isn’t my usual kind of horror. Don’t get me wrong – it gets dark. But this one has more of a thriller edge to it. This wasn’t a deliberate choice or even really a conscious one. It’s just how things worked out so I guess you can say the result was a happy accident.

Like most writers, I start work with a combination of ideas. Sort of a what if this situation met this one and then both hit this character. I knew who the main character of Burn would be. Steve Crossley: husband, father, friend. Kind of Mr Average and happy with it. Three kids; happily married. Getting through life with his focus on his family until. . .

Shit goes down.

I also wanted a kind of locked room mystery. An unexplained situation without an obvious answer to what’s going on or how it’s possible. I thought that could be fun as well as interesting. So what would happen to Mr Average when his family are murdered but then his family turn up safe and sound? How can someone deal with the sight of his wife and children dead on a slab when his wife is calling him on the phone at the same time?

At that point, I had zero clue but I wanted to find out so I wrote the first draft which, as all first drafts are, was not impressive. I worked out the issues and plotlines that went nowhere, fixed it all and came up with a second version that was much improved. A few more ideas came to me which ended up resulting in a third draft I was very happy with. Plus answering my initial question of what this would do to Steve was a bonus.

I had a literary agent around then. She liked the book but was clearly moving away from the kind of stuff I write. Things didn’t work out which was a hell of a setback. I still liked my book but didn’t know what to do with it seeing as it’s somewhere between horror and thriller. Baynam Books liked it as well – the timescale between my initial submission and their acceptance was damn quick so you can imagine how pleased I was with that. Finding it a home after getting canned by my agent was a massive boost.

Side note: a while ago, I wrote a book called Winter Graves which featured a supporting character named Ali Hannan. At the time, he was a one-off. Or so I thought. There was something about him that stuck with me so when he reappeared in Burn, I probably shouldn’t have been surprised. Some characters stay with the writer. It’s happened to me before as much as I like to explore new worlds and new people with each tale. In any case, Burn isn’t a sequel to Winter Graves in any way at all. At most, they’re set in the same universe but there’s no need to read one to follow the other. I hope you like Ali as much as I do.

Other news: I’m back on Threads (@lukewalker_writer) so feel free to join me there. Or stick with BlueSky if you prefer. I did create another Facebook page but for some reason, they deleted it within half an hour. I have no idea why and can’t get a direct answer so I figure that’s not happening. Also other news: the book I’ve been writing for what feels like the last thousand years has another 30k ish to go before draft 3 is done. And then because I’ve massively overwritten it, it will need the same amount cutting from it before I can submit it. The quality is there and I think I’ve got something special. Problem is I’ve got way too much of it. Once that’s done, it’ll be prep work for the book after Burn. Chaos is published early next year. I’m also hoping to hear about a third one soon. Ditto a few short stories which have been out there for a while. As any writer can tell you, publishing time exists outside of the rest of reality.

That’s about all for now. Talk soon.

Be well.

November (just) 2024

Been meaning to write a post for the last couple of weeks mainly to get one in before December, but real life has slowed things down. I’m currently battling the worst cough/cold I’ve had since my three rounds of Covid so that’s taken a lot out of me for the last ten days or so. Plus I’m on a week off work so feeling like crap and not getting anywhere near as much done that I planned on has really pissed me off. Here’s hoping the Christmas break goes a little more to plan.

Things are generally quiet on the publishing front. I’ve got two books out on submission at the moment – the submission window on both is done in three months or so. I think if one of them doesn’t land with anyone by then, it’ll be time to put it to one side. I like to mix up genres a tad but I’ve found that a lot of publishers (especially bigger ones) are more conservative and believe readers won’t get a book unless it fits neatly into one genre. Maybe they’re on to something – I read a book a few years which appeared to be a psych thriller but turned into something very different right at the end. It didn’t bother me but judging by some of the reviews I read, it pissed off a lot of readers who felt cheated by the change from reality to speculative.

Anyway, as proud as I am of this book, I can’t keep it open forever so if it needs to be set aside, that’s part of the life. The other one still has some time to find a home although quite a few publishers seem to be closed to submissions at the moment so it’s slow going.

In writing news, I’ve recently finished the second draft of my current book and I’m pretty happy with it. It needs a polish and a few issues need expanding while I also have to trim about 10% from the total wordcount so there’s some work to do before it’s ready to go anywhere. Once this one is done, I’m going back to a book I wrote earlier this year which got messy and directionless to see if it can be fixed. After that, who knows? Whichever idea shouts the loudest, I guess.

Depending how much you follow me on social media, you may have noticed I’ve binned Twitter (fuck calling it X) and am now on Bluesky. Twitter always had issues but for the most part, it was a fun time until recently and I don’t want to spend my time there. I tried Threads under my other name but didn’t enjoy a minute of it. Bluesky is pretty groovy so feel free to find me there or on Instagram where I’ve rebooted myself.

That’s about it for now. Talk next month when I’ll hopefully be over this cold.

Be well.

Luke

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